11. :The wordiness is not needed here ( an " incidents " noticeboard ). 12. He's cut down the game plan and the wordiness in the game plan. 13. Definite wordiness in going over it further. 14. There is no universally accepted solution to the trade-off between inclusiveness and wordiness . 15. Legislators say the wordiness and number of amendments crafted by the Legislature aren't problems. 16. Suratman has progressed little beyond the wordiness common among writers schooled in the aesthetics of the 1950s. 17. Interesting enough, ARTEST4ECHO and I agreed about the wordiness of this proposed edit ( semicolon ). 18. Maintaining the tone of the composer's prose is vital; wordiness , however, is taboo. 19. I also think the whole " Equipment " section could use a quick once-over for wordiness . 20. This is resulting in a lot wordiness , gameguide-ish text, and NPOV bias or fluff.
