21. For the sake of the concision of daily journalism, he is granted four feelings about becoming famous. 22. William Strunk Jr . advocated concision in " The Elements of Style " ( 1918 ): 23. Most helpful were your suggestions about the lead, which I re-wrote for clarity and concision . 24. What emerges is a series of punishing vignettes, as ruthless for their concision as for their grim import. 25. The book itself is intended to be an example of concision ( brevity ) and well-focused writing. 26. *The history section is, in my opinion, at the right level of concision as it is. 27. No . Readers responded to the clarity, the concision and the intellectual elegance of what Fry had to say. 28. :: : : : I guess my lack of concision drowned my present position in the mass of text. 29. Whatever reservations one might have, it is a wonderful opera, a tune-filled spectacular written with remarkable concision . 30. He is remembered by the archaeological community for his approachability, concision and enthusiasm as well as his exquisite technical drawings.