1. A few redlinks might be OK . Paragraphing a little disjointed in places. 2. The spelling, grammar and paragraphing are all secure here and were beforehand. 3. Paragraphing needs attention ( there are stubbies ), and so does the sectioning.4. Throughout, you might see if the paragraphing can be smoothed out a little. 5. Be sure to add at the end of each line in order to have proper paragraphing . 6. The letter has multiple short paragraphs, with scribed, single-lines showing the paragraphing . 7. That's the purpose of paragraphing : to give the reader a breather by sensibly breaking up the prose. 8. The printer's manuscript was further edited, adding paragraphing and punctuation to the first third of the text. 9. She was having a really hard time with spelling and paragraphing and putting into words what she was trying to say. 10. As to writing style, I tend to write in declarative, simple sentences and use standard paragraphing and context connections.